Correction d'expression ecrite en anglais

[cocolo]

pouvez vous corriger car je ne suis pas tres bonne à ça!! merci beaucoup

1)look at the speech bubbles. Which one stands out? What does it express and how? Does the picture express the same feeling and how? bulle 2 ( BANNED?!!) ,6 (i can't believe it. I just can't believe it!)

The bubble detaches from the other is in the picture two, because writing is written in large letters and bold. This image express surprise by punctuation. The images that express the same sentiments are two and six because they express a sense of incomprehention.

2) What do you think of this document? Do you like it? Why or not why?

I think this comic strips is funny. I liked it because the children go to the school Library to get a book and told that it is prohibited in the Library.
at the end of this comic stips one of the children said that they should also ban books mathematique.

3) what's your opinion concerningcomics? Do you read comics? Why or why not? What about other books? Whyt do you or don't you like reading?

I think that comic strips are fantastic. I read many comic strips, i have a collection of "Lucky luc"!
When i read a comic strips, i can see the charcters, their expressions in every situation. I don't need to imagine them.
The story is more realistic and interesting. I have the sensation to see a subtitled movie. I read many others book because i like reading fantastic stories.
I prefer to read a manga because for me in the manga there is more action and stories are much more fantastic.

[MATHEMATES]

pouvez vous corriger car je ne suis pas tres bonne à ça!! merci beaucoup

1)look at the speech bubbles. Which one stands out? What does it express and how? Does the picture express the same feeling and how? bulle 2 ( BANNED?!!) ,6 (i can't believe it. I just can't believe it!)

The bubble detaches from the other is in the picture two, because writing is written in large letters and bold. This image express surprise by punctuation. The images that express the same sentiments are two and six because they express a sense of incomprehention.

2) What do you think of this document? Do you like it? Why or not why?

I think this comic strips is funny. I liked it because the children go to the school Library to get a book and told that it is prohibited in the Library.
at the end of this comic stips one of the children said that they should also ban books mathematique.

3) what's your opinion concerningcomics? Do you read comics? Why or why not? What about other books? Whyt do you or don't you like reading?

I think that comic strips are fantastic. I read many comic strips, i have a collection of "Lucky luc"!
When i read a comic strips, i can see the charcters, their expressions in every situation. I don't need to imagine them.
The story is more realistic and interesting. I have the sensation to see a subtitled movie. I read many others book because i like reading fantastic stories.
I prefer to read a manga because for me in the manga there is more action and stories are much more fantastic.

Peux tu me mettre en français les réponses à tes questions de manière à ce que je sache exactement ce que tu veux dire.

[MATHEMATES]

Pour info c'est un forum de maths!
Donc ce n'est pas ici que tu trouveras de l'aide

[cocolo]

Peux tu me mettre en français les réponses à tes questions de manière à ce que je sache exactement ce que tu veux dire.

coucou je me suis permise de poster ici car j'ai vu qu'il y avait des devoirs similaires :lol3: .merci pour ton aide
1)
la bulle qui se détache des autres est dans l'image 2 car l'ecriture est en capital et en gras
elle exprime l'etonnement par la ponctuation
les images qui expriment les meme sentiments sont la 2 et la 6 car elles expriment un sentiment de surprise

2)
je pense que cette bande déssinée est drole . je l'ai aimé car les enfants vont à la bibliotheque chercher un livre et à leur grande surprise on leur dit que ce livre n'est plus dans la bibliotheque car il a été interdit
à la fin de cette bande dessinée l'un des enfant dit qu'il faudrait interdir les livres de math

3)
je pense que les bandes dessinees sont fantastic. je lis beaucoup de bandes dessinées, j'ai la collection de "Lucky luc"!
quand je lis un bd , je peux voir les personnages, leurs expressions dans chaque situation. je n'ai pas besoin de les imaginer
l'histoire est plus realiste et interessante, j'ai la sensation de voir un film sous titré
je lis beaucoup d'autres livres car j'aime lire les histoires fantastiques
je prefere lire les manga car pour moi il y a plus d'action et les histoires sont beaucoup plus impressionante

[MATHEMATES]

coucou je me suis permise de poster ici car j'ai vu qu'il y avait des devoirs similaires :lol3: .merci pour ton aide
1)
la bulle qui se détache des autres est dans l'image 2 car l'ecriture est en capital et en gras
elle exprime l'etonnement par la ponctuation
les images qui expriment les meme sentiments sont la 2 et la 6 car elles expriment un sentiment de surprise

2)
je pense que cette bande déssinée est drole . je l'ai aimé car les enfants vont à la bibliotheque chercher un livre et à leur grande surprise on leur dit que ce livre n'est plus dans la bibliotheque car il a été interdit
à la fin de cette bande dessinée l'un des enfant dit qu'il faudrait interdir les livres de math

3)
je pense que les bandes dessinees sont fantastic. je lis beaucoup de bandes dessinées, j'ai la collection de "Lucky luc"!
quand je lis un bd , je peux voir les personnages, leurs expressions dans chaque situation. je n'ai pas besoin de les imaginer
l'histoire est plus realiste et interessante, j'ai la sensation de voir un film sous titré
je lis beaucoup d'autres livres car j'aime lire les histoires fantastiques
je prefere lire les manga car pour moi il y a plus d'action et les histoires sont beaucoup plus impressionante

1)look at the speech bubbles. Which one stands out? What does it express and how? Does the picture express the same feeling and how? bulle 2 ( BANNED?!!) ,6 (i can't believe it. I just can't believe it!)

The bubble detaches from the other is in the picture two, because the writing is in capital letter and bold. This image expresses the astonishment by the punctuation. The images that express the same sentiments// feelings are two and six because they express a sense of incomprehension/ surprise.

2) What do you think of this document? Do you like it? Why or not why?

I think this comic strip is funny. I liked it because the children go to the school Library to get a book and he learns that there is not this book because is prohibited in the Library.
At the end of this comic strip one of the children said that it's necessary tomust prohibit math books

3) what's your opinion concerningcomics? Do you read comics? Why or why not? What about other books? Whyt do you or don't you like reading?

I think that comic strips are fantastic. I read many comic strips, i have a collection of "Lucky Luke"!
When i read a comic strips, i can see the characters, their expressions in every situation. I don't need to imagine them.
The story is more realistic and interesting. I have the sensation to see a subtitled movie. I read many books because i like reading fantastic stories.
I prefer to read a manga because for me in the manga there is more action, and stories are much more fantastic.

[cocolo]

merci beaucoup pour votre correction :++:

[MATHEMATES]

merci beaucoup pour votre correction :++:

de rien :!! en revanche n'hésite pas à faire corriger ce texte par une autre personne, mieu vaut 2 fois qu'une!