Correction d'anglais sur un txt sur le Canada

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Correction d'anglais sur un txt sur le Canada

par kitty83200 » 01 Fév 2007, 22:09

Bonjour ! voici ma rédaction d'anglais !

I’m very happy today because I won a trip across Canada !
I’d like to go see animals to Yellownife.
My brother told me: “I could see a lynx which was standing motionles near the river.”
Maybe it so exiting !
In my animal’s encyclopaedia I’ve read we can see bald eagles and grizzly.
I hope going to Grand Pré. My history teacher said me that in 1755 the british burnt the Acadians’s village. My best friend got furious when she has known this !
I don’t agree with her ! It was 250 years ago !
I’ve bought a tourist guide and I’ve learnt there are northern lights sometimes up the sky in the north of Canada.
In Quebec, there are whales in Lawrence river witch feed krill.
Polard bears afraid me ! They migrate to Hudson Bay and the habitants maybe afraid to them too !
Montreal, Toronto, Edmonton and Vancouver are the biggest touristic city of Canada.
I will go to all these cities with my boyfriend...

Now, I’m dissapointed because I told you my dream of the last night! It isn’t the reality !


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