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[Wonkz]

Bonjour

Pourriez-vous me corriger le texte en anglais que j’ai rédigé. :)

Pourriez-vous aussi s’il vous plaît rajouter quelques adjectifs / connecteurs logiques / synonymes pour étoffer le texte. Cependant essayez de garder le même niveau d’anglais que celui que j’ai utilisé et de ne pas trop modifier les phrases

Voilà pour les « consignes » et j’espère ne pas avoir fait trop de fautes dans le texte anglais

Merci d’avance à ceux qui prendront la patience de me lire et de me corriger :)

"Waterman is the nickname of young man, aged 30, whose name is called Walter Terood.

His nickname comes from Wa of “Walter” and Ter of “Terood”. In his private life, he behaves like a normal human, he lives alone and he is a swimming instructor.

But Walter is not only a normal human being, he is also a superhero who rescues people around. Except the fact that it can fly, run very quickly and jump very high, like all superheroes, he has superpowers related to water. He is able to put out fires, using water jets coming out from his hands, stop floods by drinking all the water up and even freeze liquid water.

Waterman's costume is entirely blue and we can see the water formula, H2O, on his chest. He also wears an ice mask that covers his face up so that we don’t see Walter.

But Waterman has an enemy, Fireman, very jealous of him and who tries to make him fail his mission. He uses Waterman’s main weak point: Walter needs water to morph into Waterman."

Merci à vous ! ;)