Anglais(Vérification)
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Evolution
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- Enregistré le: 16 Sep 2007, 20:34
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par Evolution » 18 Nov 2007, 11:32
Bonjour pour demain , j'ai des phrases a faire . Je les est fait maintenant a savoir si j'ai reussi
merci de me corriger si mes phrases sont fausses.
Merci.
exercice :
- It is an experience terrific
- I would like to meet foreign people for speak to them about my country.
- I wouldn't can stay abroad because I would miss my family.
- I am interrested in being in a group
- I would discover news customs and different languages.
- Living abroad would be a valuable experience for me.
- If I have the possibility I would like to go to Sweden
- Some persons do not like travelling
- In a foreign country we can getting more independant.
- Besides I could found a job easily
Merci et a bientôt
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FlorianS
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- Enregistré le: 17 Nov 2007, 16:03
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par FlorianS » 18 Nov 2007, 14:21
It is a terrific experience (adjectif toujours placé avant le nom en anglais)
I would like to [...] to talk to them about my country.
I couldn't stay abroad because .... (tu ne peux pas employer deux modaux à la suite en anglais)
Je trouve la construction de ta 4ème phrase trop lourde mais bon
"new" et pas "news" pas de s aux adjectifs en anglais ! pas d'accords !
If I had ... Concordance des temps
Some people don't like to travel (construction meilleure)
après can, base verbale et non verbe + ing, et pourquoi get more independent ? Be more independent serait plus judicieux
I could find ... could + BV
voilà !
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Data-01
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- Enregistré le: 18 Nov 2007, 13:59
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par Data-01 » 18 Nov 2007, 14:24
Evolution a écrit:Bonjour pour demain , j'ai des phrases a faire . Je les est fait maintenant a savoir si j'ai reussi
merci de me corriger si mes phrases sont fausses.
Merci.
exercice :
- It is an experience terrific
- I would like to meet foreign people for speak to them about my country.
- I wouldn't can stay abroad because I would miss my family.
- I am interrested in being in a group
- I would discover news customs and different languages.
- Living abroad would be a valuable experience for me.
- If I have the possibility I would like to go to Sweden
- Some persons do not like travelling
- In a foreign country we can getting more independant.
- Besides I could found a job easily
Merci et a bientôt
1) It's a terrifying/ frightening experiment ( si c'est une expérience de chimie par exemple)/ experience ( experience dans la vie)
2) I'd like to meet foreigners in order to tell them about my country.
3) I wouldn't be able to stay abroad because I'll miss my family.
4) I'm found of being in a band.
5) Phrase sans faute
6) If I had the possibility I'd go to Sweden.
7) Any people don't like travelling.
8) We're able to get more independant when we are abroad.
9) From another hand , I would be able to get a job easily.
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FlorianS
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par FlorianS » 18 Nov 2007, 14:28
Data 01, Il faut dire I would miss my family puisque tu emplois le conditionnel avant, concordence des temps
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Data-01
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par Data-01 » 18 Nov 2007, 15:47
FlorianS a écrit:Data 01, Il faut dire I would miss my family puisque tu emplois le conditionnel avant, concordence des temps
Ca se dit aussi :++:
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olivthill
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par olivthill » 18 Nov 2007, 19:13
Pour infos, voici mes traductions, qui, entre autres choses, me paraissent présenter l'avantage d'exprimer les choses d'une manière un peu plus directe, en plaçant souvent dés le début le point principal de la phrase comme le font généralement les anglophones, au lieu de le rejeter au milieu ou à la fin de la phrase comme le font volontiers les français :
- This experiment is frightening.
- I wish I could talk about my country to foreigners.
- I would miss my family if I were abroad.
- Living in a community is something I'm yearning for.
- I would discover news customs and different languages.
- Living abroad would be a valuable experience to me.
- I would like to go to Sweden, if possible
- Travels are no fun to some people.
- Freedom is a feeling you can have when you are far away from home.
- Finding a job would be easier to me.
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