Do we control our desires ?

[PetitePounette]

Bonsoir, j'ai un devoir d'anglais à faire et j'aimerai si possible être corriger car j'ai du mal niveau orthographe :triste: . Voici ce que j'ai fais :

A desire is a feeling that you want to do something, or to get something. But do we control our desires ?

The re are strong links between desire and will. Indeed, we can say that to want is desired untill to behave aim at reaching what desired. Moreover, a person with desires but without will, no means will have achieving its goal. Likewise, a person with will but without desires, will become cold and she will look like a robot.
So, it is will which allow to satisfy our desire or to control.

We can wonder wahat are causes of the desire ?



Voilà pour l'instant ce que j'ai fais, j'avoue que j'ai beaucoup de mal a developper ce sujet, il doit faire 300 mots et l'inspiration ne me vient pas mais bon je vais continuer !

Merci d'avance pour votre aide

[Michou19716]

A desire is a feeling that you want to do , or to get something. But do we control our desires ?

There are strong links between desire and will. Indeed, we can say that to want, is desired. However, a person with desires but without wills, will not be able to have achieve their goal. Likewise, a person with will but without desires, will become cold and she will look like a robot.
So, it is will which allow to satisfy our desire or to control.

We can wonder what are causes of the desire ?

Je pense que ca doit etre un truc du genre.

[PetitePounette]

Merci, j'ai trouvé un peu la suite mais il me manque encore une centaine de mots :

We are more or less sensitive to colour, texture, taste, smell, senses influence our choices. The sens want to act on subconscious and arouse desires.
We get for example the marketing. When a product is lauching onto the market, he is exploited for to coax people into consuming.
Moreover, scientist are employed by adman to carry out experimante in order to know to manipulate these desire or even provoke a desire for a certain product.