Nouveau texte sur le Canada

[kitty83200]

je sais j'en ai déjà mis un de texte mais la prof à pensé judicieux de changé le sujet bref voici ma nouvelle rédac ( rr je l'aime po cette prof lol :mur: )

Hi ! I’ve been to Canada last year. Canada makes me dream because we can see Norther lights up the sky in the north of canada !
I’ve begun my trip to Montreal. I’ve gone to the underground city. It was so fabulous ! I’ve eaten pankakes with maple syrup in a restaurant near a cinema. I could speak french with lots of people ! My mother was surprised when she has known that two thirds of population speak french.
Then I’ve been to Yellownife. When I’ve made canoeing the monitor let us do a break because we are so tyring ! I saw a lynx witch was standing motionless near the river, a grizzly and bald eagles. Looking so much animals is exiting ! The wildlife is so spectacular !
I’ve been to Hudson Bay for meeting my oncle. When I looked the landscape I saw a Polar bear because they migrate here at the begining of cold season. My oncle afraid me because he said to me: “Don’t worry! They try just to enter peoples’s homes !”
A the end of my trip, I’ve gone to Vancouver on the Pacific coast.

pourriez vous me dire ou sont les fautes ?

[kitty83200]

up up ! plizz répondez moi ^^ :triste:

[sinderella]

que signifie le mot syrup ? sirop?

[kitty83200]

bien sur que ça veut dire sirop !!

[kitty83200]

merci ! tu m'as rendu un grand service