Bonjour , je dois rédiger une biographie sur Ray Bradbury , je l'ai faite et j'aimeriez que vous me disez où j'ai fait des fautes ou où je dois améliorer des poassages :
One of his ancestor Mary Bradbury was sentenced for about a witch 1680 for her ideas not very orthodoxes and he conserved that mind sceptic .
He was born in Wankegan , little town in the bigmeadows on the lac of Michigan , in the worth of Chicago . He discovered the fairy dails at the age of 5 , the kingdown of Oz at six , the revue "Amazing Stories" at 8 . Then the stories of Edgar Rice Burroiughs , Blockshow , the magicien and Lon Chaney the gargoyle . Jules Vernes and the serials on the radio . It was the tile , when like Nobohov in Russia before the revolution , or like Orson Welles (born in Kenosha , a few kilometers from Wankigon , just on the other side of the border with the Winsconsin) .
He accumulates in the loft of his memory , amongst the spinning top , the kite and the broken toys , all his fantastik writing which changed him .
Wankegan was for Bardbury the same which was Hannibal (Missouri) was for Mark Twaini a place for the fall in depressium .
In 1992 , his father loasted his job at the phone compagny where he placed the wire , and the whole family left for the Quest . Tusacan (Arizona) and Los Angeles. Ray Bradbury was forteen , when he arrived the fantastic city , it was like a mirage on the border of the Pacific . The next day of his arrival he asked the vowner of the Kiosque , at the corner of Pico and western , wherewas situated the studio Metro Goldweyn Moyer "Binoclard" affairned of readers , he had a youth of a real fan . He collected onto groghs of the shars , and even drove in their limonins with them . When he finished his studies in 1938 , he mades a living with selling news-papers , and started reading at the same same time .He was influenced by Poe , ... , he signed his works on the pen name of Ron , writted fantastic and terrible stories , there were always a taste of horreur . He didn't find any publisher and founded with the help of his friends forrest J acher mann , colled in Los angeles .
He had learned short sentences , the Rody writer like Welty .. the way to write tropisme of a conscience which is waken up slowly like a paper flower in a japanese paper , with the sensation of another world .
Merci de m'aider