Re traduction en anglais

[mobo]

Bonjour,

J'aimerai savoir quelles sont ces erreurs le texte étant très court; je ne devrai pas en faire
de plus j'aimerai dire en anglais: ce choix a été fait selon...
(this choice have done about.....) est ce correct?

Je vous en remercie d'avance

[Mathusalem]

Salut

This choice has been made considering....

[florian62123]

Bonjour !! Mon prof d'anglais ma donné un Dm a faire ( un itinéraire ) et je voudré savoir si dans ce que g fait il n'y a pa de fautes !! voici mon travail :

-The first day we will arrive in Los Angeles and we will go in the hotel for night.

-The second day we will visit the city center, at two o'clock we will leave for Las Vegas and we will sleep in the Inn.

-The third day, we will leave the Inn at nine o'clock, we will visit the Eiffel tower in the morning and the Hollywood boulevard in after noon.

-The fourth day, we will leave for San Franciscos and we will visit the Chinatown then we will sleep in a luxury hotel.

-The fifth day, we will leave the hotel at 8 o'clock and we will spend the day in the car to go to Denver, but we will pass in front very of beautiful monuments.

-The sixth day, we will arrive in Denver by the sixth day morning and you will be able to do shopping in town the all day.

-The seventh day, we will leave the hotel for 9 o'clock and we will go to Washington D.C. visit the white house and the capital and we will in the hotel for night.

-The eighth day, we will visit the port of Philadelphie and we will sleep in the Inn outside of the city.

-The ninth day, we will leave the Inn at 8 o'clock to go to New York and we will visit the statue of liberty and the city.

-The tenth day you will do whatever you want of your day but you will have to be back at 6 PM in front of the hotel to go catch the plane.

Merci d'avance