Presentation en anglais

[kiara]

Bonjour à tous!
Pour lundi je doit rédiger un texte en anglais présentant mon prof d'anglais.
Je l'ai fais mais je doute que se soit tout juste! :marteau: Alors si vous pouviez m'aider en me disant les erreurs que j'aurais pu faire ce serait sympas! (...par respect pour mon prof j'ai changé les noms)
merci

My english teacher firstname's Christophe S.
He's 53 and he was born in Bordeaux in 1951. His nationality is French and he's married. He's wife is an english teacher too.
Her firstname is Cate. She works in Roosevelt (un lycée) in Mulheim.
Cate and her husband live in M.

They have two childrens. The oldest calls Veronique and she's 24. She works in a school because she's a primary school teacher.
Anne is the youngest and she's 22.
She's an art studient.
The two sisters aren't married.

Mr S. has a brother. His firstname's Pascal. He's 50 and is married. Pascal works in Nantes and it is very far from Alsace.
He's a teacher and he teaches English.

Voilà!
Bye!

[Nightmare]

Bonjour :happy3:

Voici ce que j'aurais mis à certains endroits :

The oldest calls Veronique

Ca ne veut pas dire ce que tu voulais dire je pense. Là, ce que tu as mis veut dire : "le plus vieux appelle Veronique" (il manque la préposition)

On peut mettre :
The oldest is called Veronique
Ou encore :
The oldest's name is Veronique

The two sisters aren't married

Je dirais plutot :
none of them is married

He's a teacher and he teaches English.

he's an english teacher convient mieux

:happy3:

[kiara]

Merci de m'avoir aidé!!! C'est gentil! En plus j'avais quand même beaucoup d'erreur! :marteau:
Bye!