Bonjour,
Je suis élève en première S et comme certains S je suis très nul en langue :triste:
j'ai a rendre une expression écrite en anglais j'en est donc rédiger une mais c'est beaucoup "de traduction mots a mots" et donc peut valable dans une expression !!!
Dans la mesure du possible j'aimerais que celle ci soit corriger ??? !!! ???
Se serait vraiment simpa
Et surtout ne vous attender pas a une expression de gros niveau je suis très nul en anglais
Merci d'avance
NB : les expressions en francais [ ... ] sont des expressions que je n'est pas réussi a traduire merci de m'aider aussi dessus
Subject:
How far do you think parents should interfere in their childrens decisions and life ?
Mon expression:
Today, it is a well-known fact that parents play an important role in their childrens decisions and life. But, how far they should interfere in these choices? I am going to give my personal opinion on that topical, by dealing a few subject like the studies, future, money, the friends
First and foremost, the future of a children [ se joue beaucoup ] on these studies. My parents always prompt me to do the maximum and to work well at school. Moreover they regret not having to work more. However we dont forget that the children should to do [ quelque chose qui lui plait ]. In order to prepare for the future, a children should to learn [ ce quest ] the adult life. Besides, my parents encourage me to work. For example, when my mother suggest me to come to give a hand in her shop or when my parents prompt me to search a summer job. Similary, my parents get a sum of pocket money in a account in order to learn to manage this and to spend this well. I am convinced that the fact to launch a children in the working life quite early, prepare him better for the future. For a young person, the friends matter a lot. He is important [ quil puisse ] express oneself, have a good time, go out with them. They parents shouldnt to let to do anything but we need to trust [ pour quil puisse profiter de sa jeunesse ].
To sum it up, the parents should to insist on the studies and the work for the future. But , they should to leave a part of choice and liberty in the childrens life in order they take advantage of their youth