Examen oral en anglais éventuelles erreurs

[Rayan97]

Bonjour a toutes et à tous, j ai un examen oral lundi en anglais , et j'ai donc préparé mon texte, mais je n'ai trouver personne pour en corriger la syntaxe et les éventuelles erreurs de grammaire. En voici le premier paragraphe, et merci d'avance:

"First, I will present the American Election. Hillary Clinton hadn’t luck front of Donald Trump. In fact, Trump is the winner from the biggest election of the world. Trump was born on 1946. He is a great businessman. He is the master of a big society. He is one of the biggest billionaire of the United States of America, and now, he is too a president. Normally, he is not the winner, because he has 62 billion of voice voting. Hillary has three billion more. The reason of this is that the electoral system is not the same everywhere in the world. People are angry because they thing that’s not a good man, but they have wrong. Trump has excellent projects for the USA. Americans want a change, and he is the only man in this country who can do this."

[Sulaheia]

Hello,

Attention je ne suis pas une experte en anglais, donc je dis ce qui me perturbe mais c'est juste mon avis personnel.

"First, I will present the American Election. Hillary Clinton hadn’t luck je dirais "had no luck" front of jamais entendu "front of" dans ce sens, mais peut être que ça se dit Donald Trump. In fact, Trump is the winner from "of" plutôt que "from" the biggest election of the world. Trump was born on 1946. He is a great businessman. He is the master je trouve que "master" fait bizarre ici. changer en "leader", "CEO" (si c'est le cas), ou je sais pas quoi d'autre of a big society. He is one of the biggest billionaire of the United States of America, and now, he is too a president je dirais: "he is president too". Normally, he is not the winner, because he has 62 billion of voice voting structure de phrase un peu bizarre, je sais pas si c'est correct - un petit "should" dans la phrase peut être ?. Hillary has three billion more. The reason of this is that the electoral system is not the same everywhere in the world. People are angry because they thing "they think" - sinon tu dis "ils chose" plutôt que "ils pensent" that’s not a good man, but they have wrong"they are wrong" - on dit "to be wrong" - ça risque de lancer un débat politique ça ! . Trump has excellent projects for the USA. Americans want a change, and he is the only man in this country who can do this."

[Rayan97]

merci beaucoup