Cover_Letter (English)

[kevin0496]

Bonsoir/Bonjours
Ma prof d'anglais ma demandé de rendre une lettre de motivation mais en anglais (cover letter) voici la mienne sous forme de texte et de piece jointe(.odt openoffice) telechargement de la piece jointe ICI
si il y a des fautes pouvez vous me l'aies indiquer

Texte :


xxxx, xxxx
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxxxxx






Dear Sir or Madam,


I am writting to apply for the job of repairing computer
which you advertised recently in the newspaper
I am fourteen years old and I am in secondary school but
I can work at weekends and after school from 5:00pm to 6:00pm
I would enjoy repairing computer because I am fond of computer
and surfing the net. I have already repairing so this would be an
enriching experience for me and I am ready to work hard.
Thank you for your time and attention.


Sincerely,
xxxxxxx








X : représente l'annonymat


Merci,

[lamiaa20092009]

je pense qu'il nya pas de faute : )

[Mathusalem]

Bonsoir/Bonjours
Ma prof d'anglais ma demandé de rendre une lettre de motivation mais en anglais (cover letter) voici la mienne sous forme de texte et de piece jointe(.odt openoffice) telechargement de la piece jointe ICI
si il y a des fautes pouvez vous me l'aies indiquer

Texte :


xxxx, xxxx
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxxxxx






Dear Sir or Madam,


I am writting to apply for the job of repairing computer
which you advertised recently in the newspaper
I am fourteen years old and I am in secondary school but
I can work at weekends and after school from 5:00pm to 6:00pm
I would enjoy repairing computer because I am fond of computer
and surfing the net. I have already repairing so this would be an
enriching experience for me and I am ready to work hard.
Thank you for your time and attention.


Sincerely,
xxxxxxx




X : représente l'annonymat


Merci,

I can work on weekends
I would enjoy repairing computerS because I'm passionate about them and about surfing on the net. (bon..)
I have already done some repair work, so this would be an enriching....
..and I am willing to work hard (trad. de Je suis prêt à + verbe)



PS: On te l'avait déjà corrigé y a pas longtemps.
PS2: Pardon, je vois juste que laamia a fait un bump inutile pour dire des abbérations.. autant pour moi.