Bonjour,
Je dois écire un texte en anglais avec 7 situations différentes et 7 conseils qui vont avec.
( Should and Shouldn't)
Je suis nulle en anglais alors ça ne ressemble à rien, je n'ai pas d'imagination et c'est de la pure traduction littérale...
Est-ce que qqn pourrait me corriger svp
Mercii biien
1) I want to party with my friends but my parents don't agree because they say:'' You are too young'' and my friends laugh at me.
You should to speak with them and you should say that you are old and you can to party without doing anything stupid.
2) I have a problem I work a lot but I have always bad marks...
You should to try to learn two or three days before the test because a few students have need that.
3) All my friends get pocket money and they can go to shopping together and sometimes they go to the cinema...
You should discuss with your parents and maybe they agree to give you but you had never asked them.
4) I would like to paint my bedroom but I don't know with what colors: I think blue is good because it's neutral, green is good too it's simple and fresh...
You shouldn't choose your favourite color because after you don't love and it's fun to change.
5) I play the piano and four times a week I have a lesson and I don't have enough time for homework and my mother is unhappy, she wants that I stop the music...
You should work at the weekend. You should for example do all your homework and like that you can play music or you should can to have only three lessons.
6) Next week it's the holidays and I have a choice between: One week with my parents in Egypt or ones in Alpen with my friends... I don't know what do you do because Egypt is wonderful and holidays with my friends is exceptional...
I understand you but you should go with your family because you have time for the holidays with your friends when you are older.
7) In the end of the school year we have a camp during a week but the problem is it's four possibilities and I would like to go in ''Ardèche'' but my best friend can't go here so she wants we go only together in '' Barcelona''...
It's difficult but you should go where there is a lot of people and you shouldn't go with her. If it's your best friend she cans understand and she goes with another people.