Correction de mon DM d'anglais!

[florian62123]

Bonjour !! Voila mon prof d'anglais ma donné un Dm, de devé faire un itinéraire dans les Etats Unis, et je voudré savoir si dans se ke g fé il ny a pa tro de faute !! Merci de me repondre vite !!

-The first day we will arrive in Los Angeles and we will go in the hotel for night.

-The second day we will visit the city center, at two o'clock we will leave for Las Vegas and we will sleep in the Inn.

-The third day, we will leave the Inn at nine o'clock, we will visit the Eiffel tower in the morning and the Hollywood boulevard in after noon.

-The fourth day, we will leave for San Franciscos and we will visit the Chinatown then we will sleep in a luxury hotel.

-The fifth day, we will leave the hotel at 8 o'clock and we will spend the day in the car to go to Denver, but we will pass in front very of beautiful monuments.

-The sixth day, we will arrive in Denver by the sixth day morning and you will be able to do shopping in town the all day.

-The seventh day, we will leave the hotel for 9 o'clock and we will go to Washington D.C. visit the white house and the capital and we will in the hotel for night.

-The eighth day, we will visit the port of Philadelphie and we will sleep in the Inn outside of the city.

-The ninth day, we will leave the Inn at 8 o'clock to go to New York and we will visit the statue of liberty and the city.

-The tenth day you will do whatever you want of your day but you will have to be back at 6 PM in front of the hotel to go catch the plane.


Merci !!

[Sergei]

The sixth day, we will arrive in Denver by the sixth day morning and you will be able to do shopping in town the all day.

=> The sixth day, we will arrive in Denver at 6 A.M and ( you ? ) will be able to do shopping in the town all the day

-The seventh day, we will leave the hotel for 9 o'clock and we will go to Washington D.C. to visit the white house and the capital and we will sleep in an hotel for thenight.


-The eighth day, we will visit Philadelphia's harbour and we will sleep in an Inn outside of the city.

-The tenth day you will do whatever you want of your day but you will have to be back at 6 PM in front of the hotel to pas de go catch the plane.

-The first day we will arrive in Los Angeles and we will sleep in an hotel for night.

-The third day, we will leave the Inn at nine o'clock, we will visit the Eiffel tower in the morning and the Hollywood boulevard in the after noon.

-The fourth day, we will leave for San Francisco pas de s and we will visit pas de the Chinatown and then we will sleep in a luxury hotel.



Voila !

[Blisca]

Bonsoir ,

pour quand est ce DM ? j'y ai repéré d'un regard futil quelques fautes comme an hotel qui est "a hotel" , et au lieu de mettre "we will" directement mettre "we'll" ...

[Sergei]

Oui, en effet j'ai pas tout corrigé ...

[Missice02]

La Tour Eiffel aux E-U ?
Ah bon ? J'pensais qu'elle se situait à Paris, en France ...

[Timothé Lefebvre]

Il y a une T.E miniature à Vegas, à part ça ...

[Missice02]

Ouais enfin c'est pas très réaliste tout ça .. Le matin la T-E à Vegas & Hollywood Bd ensuite ..

[uztop]

de toutes façons le topic a deux semaines, je pense que le DM est terminé depuis longtemps maintenant !

[Missice02]

Sauf s'il est en vacances & qu'il est à rendre lundi !
'Fin Bref ! :briques:

[uztop]

possible, je n'y avais pas pensé.

[Timothé Lefebvre]

En vacances du 02 au 23 février ?!
Chanceux !!

[uztop]

ben oui, il a déménagé pour changer de zone au bon moment

[Timothé Lefebvre]

Pas con ça :zen:

A propos moi je m'en vais demain donc il va y avoir un peu moins de modos cette semaine (la connexion dans la station de ski n'est pas certaine ...) !

[uztop]

bonnes vacances alors.
Moi je vais essayer de me connecter de temps en temps mais comme d'habitude, je n'aurai pas le temps de tout faire