Bonjour à tous,
la prof' nous a donné à faire le sujet d'anglais du BAC 2009, est-ce que quelqu'un peut corriger mon travail ?
Subject 1 (a+b):
a) ll. 4-6 'Connor was becoming popular with his classmates on account of the hundreds of
electronic toys and state-of-the-art computer games that filled his enormous bedroom.'
Does popularity depend on what you have? (150 words)
b) l. 16 'Algy had a prestigious job valuing paintings for London's smartest auctioneers.'
What is your idea of a prestigious job? (150 words)
a/ With this text, we can think that popularity depends on what we have because Connor is new at the school but he already became popular because he has a lot of electronic toys and computer games. Moreover, in his house there is a home cinema and he has got an enormous bedroom. So, when people comes at his home they see that they have a high standard of living and it makes a reputation of rich. It gives envy to be friendly with the person because thanks to its materials possessions, we understand that it mades a succes it life. However I think that the money shouldnt bring to the popularity, its better to like somebody who has a human, intelectual and cultural wealth that a person who has simply valuables.
Moreover, I find unhealthy to expose its just wealth to be liked. Its better that a person who has a talent deserves to be popular. So I think that the popularity shouldnt depend on what we possess but on what we are and what we make.
b/First, for me, a prestigious work corresponds to a work which is respected, which asks to make some things of importance. Then its a job which asks for big responsibilities and that everybody couldnt practice because often, they are professions where are needed many studies. For example, I think that to be doctor or fire brigades are prestigious professions because they can save lives and help people, there is an heroic part who arouses the admiration. Furthermore, I also considere that to be business manager is a prestigious job because it asks to know how to manage a team and to take charge of big projects. Finally, for many people, the idea of a prestigious job is based on the fact that there is a good salary.
Merci