J'ai besoin de votre aide pour corriger mon texte d'anglais

[Yuna29]

Bonjour pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger d'éventuelles fautes s'il vous plaît ? Merci

(sujet : Is it possible ot live without technology ? Why ? Why not ? )

Nowadays the technology takes a big place in our daily. So, can we live without technology ? To answer this question we are going to say why we can live without and why we can’t.

On the one hand it’s true that world won’t die without technology ! We can see that in developing countries, most of the population haven’t got access to technology, mobile phone or ecological car and they can live normally. The technology isn’t vital. Moreover, some years ago people lived without much technology in the way they hadn’t mobile phones for example. So on the whole we can survive without technology.

On the other hand it’s difficult nowadays to live without technology, it's part of the evolution and also part of industrialization to our countries future because it’s very useful as the mobile phone who allow us to keep in touch with ours friends, ours relatives or with work partners all the time and we can be contacted wherever we are because we are always reached ! moreover computer and the Internet are very useful for students to do researches or to chat with their friends. If the technology network would collapse, we would not believe how many people would panic on this sort of issue !

By way of conclusion we can say that nowadays we can’t live without technology even if the past generations had lived without her.

[ThSQ]

Nowadays the technology takes a big place in our daily. So, can we live without technology ?

C'est pas sûr que ce soit le bon forum ...

big : large plutôt
daily : ressemble à une traduc littérale de "quotidien" (nom commun) alors que daiuly est un adjectif.

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(y'a du boulot ...)

>> without her

J'ai toujours pensé que la technologie était la fille de la science :++: