Correction d'anglais

[pedro623]

es ce que quelqu'un pourrait me coriiger ce texte
le sujet est:"what is your idea of an attractive town?"
I would like a city which everybody likes. It would be one very big city with a good geographical situation (near the mountain and near the sea). In this city there would be everybody, the young people and the adults, for the girls and boy. There would be many gardens public clean, or people could stroll, play, rest or go in for sport. In this city there would be no unemployment, but on the contrary the work with profusion. People could choose the profession which they want and where they want. There would be a very big sports complex, where the young people and the least young could practice the sport which they like. For the girls there would be a very big shopping center with all their favorite stores, where she could spend their whole days. Next to the shopping center there would be a big cinema and a tenpin bowling. For the boys, there would be a wonderful stadium of football, just like that of Wembley, and a team of very senior form. In this city, the real-estate would be very cheap. This city would distance itself from the others by its cleanness. There would be any tag and any dropping of dogs on pavements. There would be also free public transportation, non-polluting, to facilitate the transport of people and to fight against the pollution. In this city the respect would reign, there would be no theft and no crime. To conclude this city would be pleasant, appropriate, dynamic and joyful!
merci d'avance

[nAti]

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