Difficulté de mon devoir

[meme3001]

g un devoir a faire pour le cour d'anglais qui consite a expliquer une première fois. c'est un travail pour beaucoup de point. Vous pourriez me dire si il y a des fautes svp


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I remember well the first time I took the train. It happened two months ago. It was the train for to go to wallaby. I was thirteen at the time. There were four of my friends.

I was afraid to get lost because the station was big. But my friends reassured me by saying me they already had take the train. I was relaxed after they said me that. We were all happy to do a day to wallaby.

In the end, it was a very good day. I am not any more afraid to take the train. I was so excited I wanted to return over there.

[lolip]

Je pensais que c'était un forum math moi?

[shakira]

va sur un forum d'anglais ou sur un traducteur :happy2: ! good luck
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shakira