Correction d'anglais !!

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Posted by: Céline570

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Some persons saw ghosts but not me thus I do not believe in it ! Maybe that if I had seen it a I it believe.
I think not that Extra-terrestres exists because I think that if they would exist they would have already shown themselves!
I think that the supernatural exists that in the science fiction!
Merci d'avance !



Posted by: olivthill

Some persons have seen ghosts but not me thus I do not believe in them ! Maybe if I had seen them, I would believe in their existence.
I don't think that Extra-terrestrials exist because I think that if they would exist they would have already shown themselves!
I think that supernatural beings exist in science fiction!

Si l'on considère que les hommes sont encore majoritairement des barbares, on peut penser que les hommes ne seraient pas dignes d'être visités par des extra-terrestres, et on pourrait dire :
"Les extra-terrestres existent, la preuve, c'est qu'ils ne se montrent pas !"



Posted by: anima

Citation:
Posté par olivthill
Some persons have seen ghosts but not me thus I do not believe in them ! Maybe if I had seen them, I would believe in their existence.
I don't think that Extra-terrestrials exist because I think that if they would exist they would have already shown themselves!
I think that supernatural beings exist in science fiction!

Si l'on considère que les hommes sont encore majoritairement des barbares, on peut penser que les hommes ne seraient pas dignes d'être visités par des extra-terrestres, et on pourrait dire :
"Les extra-terrestres existent, la preuve, c'est qu'ils ne se montrent pas !"

Pas d'accord avec le tout premier.

Some persons have seen/saw (dépend vraiment du contexte. Ils ont vu et voient toujours, ou ils ont vu tout court?) ghosts but not me thus I do not believe in them ! Maybe if I had seen them, I would believe in their existence.
I don't think that Extra-terrestrials exist because I think that if they existed they would have already shown themselves!
I think that supernatural beings exist in science fiction!



Posted by: Céline570

Merci pour vos réponses !!!!!!!











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